Sunday, July 20, 2008

Story Part V

Ally took in the scenery from the front seat as Blake drove. She had asked him where they were going, but he told her it was a surprise. Ally thought about what Blake and Aiden had said about Fred. Ally, who had never really been invited to many parties -let alone parties given by boys- was thinking of still going to Fred's party, despite the boys' warnings. She glanced back at Gwen, who she could tell was thinking the same thing. The Jeep stopped suddenly. They were by a river, shaded by trees and decorated with flowers. It was very pretty. Blake and Aiden got out of the Jeep went around to the trunk, and got out a picnic basket and a blanket.
"A picnic?" Ally asked even though she knew what it was.
"Yep surprise," Aiden said.
"Wow guys, this is really cool," Gwen said smiling.
"Yep now let's eat," Blake said.
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Ally and Gwen got ready to go to Fred's party.
"Do you feel bad going against what the guys said, after the picnic they gave us?" Ally asked.
"Nope," Gwen replied. "They don't own us, we barely know them."
"You're right, but i have a feeling like they'll find out, and not want to talk to us ever again."
"How are they going to find out?" Gwen asked. "Don't worry, we'll talk to them tomorrow, they said they're going to take us to The Eye. "
"You're right, let's go Party!" The two girls left their hotel room, got into their rented car and drove to Oxford. They arrived just as the party was really getting going. They knocked on the dorm door, which was answered by Fred.
"Hey you two made it!" He smiled widely. "I'm afraid I didn't catch your names though,"
"I'm Gwen, and this is Ally."
"Nice to meet you two, now come on in," they entered to find guys and girls drinking, laughing, and dancing. "There's drinks and food over there, I regret that I have to leave you lovely ladies, and tend to my duties as a host, have fun," he left and Ally and Gwen stood there kinda awkwardly until a couple nearby people started talking to them, and soon they were having a great time.

2 comments:

Gwen said...

What is 'the eye' supposed to be? i'm lost

Sarah said...

It's that giant ferris wheel in london look it up online and u'll see it